I also managed to also get some feedback from someone who teaches classes and magazine and newspaper design. He looked at my work and found nothing wrong with my first page, but on the second page, he thought that the article text looks to squashed. He recommended that two columns would be better than having three. I took this and Incorporated this into my work. Also, I had another look over other local newspapers and realised that the style of paragraphing was actually different, and would give the text more of a flow for the reader, so I took this and decided to incorporate this for the whole local newspaper.
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